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Skalding's avatar

I really like how you've characterized Kat here; it's our first time in her head, and the details you've included already give a good idea of what kind of person she is. Her justifying her fight with her mom in her head, her decision to rescue poor Bolt and even take him home, the little detail about playing "young woman out of her depth" to buy booze in college, all tell the reader a lot about her as a fully-realized person.

The start of the case is nicely eerie. Very interested to see where it goes!

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Oathbound Soliloquy: Ironsworn's avatar

Very interesting development so far of the story. I like Kat, if for nothing else, for rescuing Bolt.

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