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Kerova's avatar

Well damn! This story arc is sick! Sooooooo good!! Your prose make the atmosphere palpable. And Kat has become one tough agent!

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SolumProtocol's avatar

Thanks that really means a lot! I wanted to dial up some of the horror in the writing for this one seeing as it goes sideways so quickly compared to the others!

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EnoNomi's avatar

I'm not familiar with the Delta Green Lore, but I was picturing the third ghost in Scrooged.

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SolumProtocol's avatar

I haven’t seen the movie but looking up a picture, the imagery is very accurate!

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Jake Zemeckis's avatar

Another good one! Really enjoyed the deal with the devil and that whole interaction. Let's see if I will finally meet Palmer hahah

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SolumProtocol's avatar

It’s always a coin flip if the missing person last seen in a strange, ominous house is still alive or not haha. I don’t think I knew at this stage which one Palmer was! Thanks for reading!

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Jake Zemeckis's avatar

That suspense is working really well. I imagine that not knowing makes the writing more fun.

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Andrew Leggett's avatar

That took a turn I wasn’t expecting. Can’t believe she destroyed the circle but looking forward to see where it all leads.

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SolumProtocol's avatar

Right? Hard to tell if that was my player brain being sloppy or my character taking a big risk haha, probably a mixture of both, Kat isn’t as concerned with procedure anymore!

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