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Jake Zemeckis's avatar

Love how you layered the paranoia and suspense in this one. The smell, the gore, and Anderson’s ragged state really sell the desperation.

Great escalation of stakes, and great read as usual, Solum!

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EnoNomi's avatar

I'm glad we can't share smells over the internet!

"I can always tell I’m unsure/nervous about a scene when I start asking these basic questions, instead of just assuming either way."

I think I do this when I think I've been writing more than playing and don't want to be railroading things. Sometimes I just get into a flow though.

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