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Kerova's avatar

Excellent read! I liked Kat’s inner dialogue about changes in herself.

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SolumProtocol's avatar

Thank you! I thought I should address it as I had been having her senses play more and more of a role in the scenes haha

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HEAD SWAP's avatar

Reads like a novel! I like the rolls as foot notes, makes for a pleasant read. Probably took a chunk of work to do

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SolumProtocol's avatar

Thank you! Moving the footnotes over probably takes longer than the rest of the editing haha, but it’s worth it!

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Andrew Leggett's avatar

It’s building nicely. Feels like the calm before the storm.

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SolumProtocol's avatar

Thank you! I’ve been pretty reactionary so far, so I wanted to try and be more proactive moving into the finale and use some of the tradecraft parts of the rule books. It didn’t really work 😅

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